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The beast
Contributed by
Shadow
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:40:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Filled with rage from days of old
This brutal grudge I still hold
I swear I do truly try
To hold this best I hod inside
It rages and trashes in my heart
All my census at last depart
The beast is winning this sick war
I hear its breath outside my door
This burden is too heavy to bare
At my heat the pain does tare
I slowly fall under the spell
Sung from the demons of hell
My eyes begin to grow dark
This sweet world I do part
I swear to god I truly tired
To hide the beast that lurks inside
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2004-02-07 01:40:27]
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Re: The beast
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:36:26 AM AEST
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THAT WAS CONSTRUCTED PRETTY WELL!
IT MADE ITS POINT,IN FINE DETAIL!!YOU DID A VERY GOOD JOB!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: The beast
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by mercedes on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:38:56 AM AEST
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| I agree, very well written. |
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