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Love and the Darkness
Contributed by
slayer_015
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:36:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The day dawned black through unseen clouds, As I woke from light to darkness.
I saw the events of the night gone by, In my mind there was nothing,but darkness.
I heard the whisper of ten thousand sceams, In a world that knew nothing,but darkness.
I smelled the death of a wasted forever, In a void that reeked of darkness.
I touched the hand of the one I sought, In my pain I felt nothing,only darkness.
The night came slowly,with no rest to bare, And as I slept,I knew,I was the dakness.
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Re: Love and the Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:16:21 AM AEST (User
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man... this whole darkness thing, it's leeching through your words... freaky!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Love and the Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 11:03:50 AM AEST (User
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I loved this, the flow was great, dark and well expressed,
pixie xx |
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