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The Perfect Day
Contributed by
slayer_015
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:56:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On a day born of laughter,
I stumble out of bed,
With her name upon my lips,
And her words still in my head.
I remember each I love you,
And laugh again aloud,
As I look into the sky,
And see not one dark cloud.
Though I miss her all day long,
I'm really not alone,
For I keep her in my heart,
And love her when she's gone.
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2004-02-07 03:56:56]
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Re: The Perfect Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:52:22 AM AEST
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Passion, love, longing...all in twelve lines! Excellent work.
Truly,
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