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A Last Try
Contributed by
annabell
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:03:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The bottle of pills looks so inviting,
and its the only thing I havn't been trying.
It's a nearly full bottle of death,
that will make me take my last breath.
So I swallow every last one till the bottle is empty,
and wait to see what will become of me.
I start to feel the effects and it hasn't been long,
a smile crosses my face maybe this time i'll really be gone.
I start to get dizzy,
the thought crosses my mind will anybody miss me.
I start to throw up blood.
I try to get up but my legs buckle and i hit the floor with a thud.
Weakness is now setting in.
I guess this is a battle i'll win.
My vision gets blurry,
I guess this is finally the end of me.
My vision gets dark and my breathing is slow,
my heart stops beating and what that means, I know.
My battle I've finally one,
and what I've always wanted i have become.
Copyright ©
annabell
... [
2004-02-07 06:03:01]
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Re: A Last Try
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by winged on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:54:41 AM AEST
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| That was so powerful and engaging. Thank you for sharing it with us |
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Re: A Last Try
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by mercedes on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:21:21 AM AEST
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| Very well written, but such a sad topic. Are you okay? |
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Re: A Last Try
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by Tichawangana on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 12:07:56 PM AEST
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| My goodness annabell, why on earth did you want to do that? Anyway the fact that you wrote the poem means you're still alive! Keep writing. That's one thing you can keep trying... Peotry is life. |
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Re: A Last Try
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:45:35 PM AEST
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OUCH! IT WAS SO GRAPHIC & DETAILING!!
THE VOICE OF A VISION SO VAIN!!! BUT YET
WITH A SOUND SO SILENT,IT'S SNEAKY!!!!
P.S. GOOD ONE!!!!!
DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: A Last Try
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:38:07 PM AEST
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this was familiar good poem, brought back some memories. I hope u don't actually feel like that.
Bobo (Joel) |
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