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Poison
Contributed by
Elf
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:15:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Your eyes a crystal blue
Bluer than the sky.
Your touch is as gossamer;
softer than I ever thought.
You move with such grace,
much more than the swan.
Your voice is gentle upon my ear
And harmonious as a song.
But the words that fall
from your perfect lips.........
Are of such a poison
I'm afraid that it will kill me.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-02-07 13:15:09]
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Re: Poison
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:11:54 PM AEST
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Powerful poem! Its so bitter sweet! I loved it! Really great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Poison
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:11:56 PM AEST
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| good poem! You have a wonderful talent! |
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Re: Poison
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:16:21 PM AEST
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OUCH!!!! Good write....
Jennni |
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Re: Poison
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by Shadow on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:17:29 PM AEST
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| Good wright! but i must wonder... Is there a persion that inspires all this? If there is be he god or devil or the marige of both ... man. |
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