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Intellectual Affair
Contributed by
LaurenShields
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:02:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You passed me by,
Taking in my body almost laughingly,
As if conquering me would be no challenge for you.
Still, you stopped to converse,
And I watched your eyes devour everything in their paths,
Making their way over my breasts and moist skin,
As if I were nothing new.
We talked of Nin and Jung,
Intellectuals hiding our sensual curiousities behind a veil of literacy,
As if we did not want anyone to know of our primitive and inarticulate desires.
I am surprised,
The illegality of our relationship does not scare you,
Rather, I think it draws us both in,
Both artists on a search for the unknown,
For the risk of love.
We both know our weaknesses,
They are that which feed on us,
They feed on every lovely bone of newness,
Of wonder until all of it has been devoured and we have uncovered all its mystery.
We both know tomorrow will be another challenge,
Another battle to be won for each of us,
For now though,
We savour our sexual endeavors,
We taste the skin of newness,
Knowing it will dissinegrate in the morning light,
A biting passion borne of a silk and satin night.
Copyright ©
LaurenShields
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2004-02-07 14:02:55]
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Re: Intellectual Affair
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by Merry on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:49:35 PM AEST
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A very intriguing write and sounds like you live a rather adverturous lifestyle. Well written, like a short story almost.
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Re: Intellectual Affair
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:33:39 PM AEST
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Very good write. Loved the title and what it implies...
Welcome to ypdc..
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Re: Intellectual Affair
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:26:47 PM AEST
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steamy write had me drawn into this
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Re: Intellectual Affair
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by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:41:35 PM AEST
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Wow Lauren...you left me completely speachless...After reading your poem a shiver went down my spine.Truth be told,this is one of my favorite poems I've ever read.You have beautiful talent,never stop writing,I will be sure to check out your other work,must be all good!Excellent work!I loveddddddddd it !Wow!As mentionned before,I'm speachless........A million + stars!
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Re: Intellectual Affair
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:50:29 PM AEST
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Whoa what a poem, suggestive and truthful. Amazingly written loved it! Keep it up!
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