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The Way you make me Feel
Contributed by
MariaXsoccerXrock
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:39:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I didnt leave my room today
the sun was out
it was a beautiful day
but i coudnt see it
with all the tears in my eyes
the way you make me feel inside
please dont leave
your my everything
please dont break the
promise you told me
just a few ago
that you would
"love me forever"
and you would kiss
me so gently and
take me away
the love was unreal
the way you make me
feel
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MariaXsoccerXrock
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2004-02-07 14:39:25]
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Re: The Way you make me Feel
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:54:31 PM AEST
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Yeah its a very common feeling when you're afraid that the love you share can die. That's life heh, The poem is great, fluent and easy going, holds strong emotion. Keep on writing great poem!
Anne :D |
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