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The One Of My Heart
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What do I see?
In front of these eyes
Do I see you?
Or just a mere nothing
The empty spaces grow,
Leaving a lonely hole
I see you in front of my eyes
The one in my heart
Your eyes reach upon me
Just looking blankly
As you pass by
You don't notice me
Why don't you?
You are so fair
The one of my heart
You don't know me
But I know you,
Deep Inside these feelings...
What are these feelings I have for you?
My heart only grows...
Grows more lonely & grave
The one in my heart,
You are the one I love.
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-02-07 19:21:08]
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Re: The One Of My Heart
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:29:25 PM AEST
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Oh this poem is full of frustration and sadness and love, what a happy combination! As i read it i got the feeling that the poem is written from personal experience. Great write Loved it!
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Re: The One Of My Heart
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:46:13 PM AEST
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May that person's eyes meet yours... May your wish come true.
Take care.
David |
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Re: The One Of My Heart
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by desertwispers on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:01:59 AM AEST
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