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more garbage
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:27:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i'm dirty and i'm broken
they want me healthy and unseen
(well) they're all countless liars
only victims to the scene
Copyright ©
TaintedOptomist
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2004-02-07 19:27:18]
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Re: more garbage
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:31:53 PM AEST
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interesting... I think it could have been longer though.... oh well... guess you weren't on the toilet too long... hehe... that's too funny.
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Re: more garbage
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:37:26 PM AEST
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Short and rhymic and the words are really strong........i.e. Loved it! ......hmm wish I could get some inspiration on the toilet too lol :p
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Re: more garbage
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by Jazz on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:06:13 PM AEST
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Ok, I used to play music in the bathroom on my trumpet, becasue of good acoustics.. They say we do our best thinking in the bathroom. Ha ha!
I like your lyric. It's a good start, now finish it!
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