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Shadow
Contributed by
L-Dee
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Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:42:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As the shadow covered my body
timeless spells
the moonlight shone towards me
I do not feel the cold, nor do I fear the shadow
As the mist surrounding my body, grew closer
I thought of you now free from all pain
soul was nolonger surrounded by tissue
but a free spirit in the sky
As the light grew closer
it took hold of my hand
then walked me towards
my promise land
Copyright ©
L-Dee
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2004-02-08 04:42:38]
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Re: Shadow
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:15:25 PM AEST
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| Good poem, i liked the last stanza. Welcome to the site. |
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Re: Shadow
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:29:57 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc...the best poetry site on the net!!! Lovely write...
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Re: Shadow
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by pain_and_tears on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 05:14:43 PM AEST
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| I took your advise and read your poem. I like it very much. good write |
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Re: Shadow
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by Kie on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:11:11 PM AEST
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Welcome, Welcome!!
Bravo on this one. I thought it was a great first submission. You have alot of talent. I look forward to seeing more.
Kie |
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