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Little, Lost, Unloved Angel!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 05:47:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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unlike the angels, upon the sky,
i'm a flying disaster, about to die.
my wings are torn, i can't help a soul,
i feel like a know-one, and i'll never be whole!
i've tried all things, within my power,
done my good deeds, but i still feel sour.
i was good in class, at angel school,
i would never misbehave, like the other fools.
the other people, they went to hell,
but i did it, and represented my family well!
i was a good angle, unlike the rest,
until the day when life turned to a mess.
i don't know how, i don't know why,
but some-thing hapened, some-one died.
so i got the blame, got the full blast,
i did what i could, but they died at last.
so that was it, damage was done,
and now i'm the looser, with know-one,
but a gun!
i look at the mental, i wonder will it kill me,
i stare into the blackness of it, i pull the trigger...
thing is i can't die, i'm already dead!
so they send me down to hell, with a hole and bullet through my head!!!!!
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2004-02-08 05:47:55]
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Re: Little, Lost, Unloved Angel!
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:26:49 AM AEST
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| i think i understand this well dont worry i think weve all been their!!! i liked the twist in the end it was great. |
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