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A Suicide Note
Contributed by
aboutdesouffle
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Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I killed myself today...
Put a gun to my temple
And pulled the trigger
It didn't hurt at all - it was so quick
The blood flowing down the side of my face looked fake
My eyes are open
With gaze fixed on the flowers
In the window box
There's a single tear on my face
A last regret
I didn't know where I was going
But I knew where I'd been
I couldn't go back there anymore
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aboutdesouffle
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2004-02-08 12:45:00]
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Re: A Suicide Note
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:37:07 PM AEST
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Hmm The poem is great, about the question well you seem to have a thing for suicide writing, I passed through a phase where I wanted to kill myself and had made even desperate attempta, now i'm really greatful i didn't manage to kill myself beacuse life is full of surprises, good and bad ones but still its worth trying don't give up continue writing you're a good poet :D
Anne :D |
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Re: A Suicide Note
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by Hoots on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:08:12 AM AEST
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| Dang man! This poem gave me mad goosebumps. It was so descriptive, it was crazy! -Hoots |
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