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I give up on love
Contributed by
trhpeanut
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:05:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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For years i craved to taste true Love.
For years i have waited for my loves first, true kiss.
Although im not to blame,
pretending my love's worth waiting for.
resltless days,
slepless nights.
tears and pain, is all i gained.
But, yet after all the grief
time after time saying "never again"
still i continued to play my very own naive game
actually believing love existed.
Love could exist.
Love would exist.
But, love ceases to exist
that's the point i missed.
So, i sigh and, wave a final good-bye.
I give up on you, love.
I give up.
I give up, on
Love.
Copyright ©
trhpeanut
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2004-02-08 14:05:30]
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Re: I give up on love
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:23:17 PM AEST
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Oh what a sad poem! I really felt like crying. Your words are really shattering. I loved this poem because I can relate to it. I hope you'll find someone that will make you believe in love again
Anne :D |
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Re: I give up on love
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:53:30 PM AEST
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Oh wow, this is such an awesome one.... I feel your pain! For a long time I've been chasing and not catching, looking and not finding, waiting and not recieving...... I know exactly how you feel. But I don't think I've completely given up. Not yet atleast. For now, I'm done looking for love. But who knows? Maybe it'll find me, find you, find all of us.... who knows?
You did a wonderful job in writing this. Keep it going =)
God bless,
Ellen
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Re: I give up on love
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by Kie on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:01:26 PM AEST
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| They say love finds you when you least expect it. I liked this poem alot, thought it was great to read. I think this is the first one I have read by you and it was fantastic! Kie |
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