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given up on evermore
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:38:31 PM in AEST
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this heart of mine has many colours
onto these pages of poetry it flows,
one silent yearning teardrop falls
as white loves lost by waterfalls,
~*~
with passions red filled with need
the deepest crimson when it bleeds,
quietly resting until from soul it parts
silently waiting, one cold black heart.
~*~
love comes to it in many colours
wanting something of sweet evermore,
showing misty whistful blues
crystal diamonds friendships true,
~*~
though this one likes to come and go
and at times orangy yellow blows,
this heart so numb it doesn't care
comes the blackness of despair,
~*~
why now heart's love is seen by me
fading as grey the biggest mystery,
far away on love's spring green
then what colours will be seen?
~*~
pink sprayed gently in sunsets too
these shades heart remembers new,
all creative love is always kind
as radiant purples fill the mind,
~*~
heart to soul colourfully whispering
one blackened teardrop quietly glistening,
at least they'll know she gave her all
whilst heart's artistic pallet falls,
~*~
the heart runs right out the door,
its given up on evermore.
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Re: given up on evermore
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:55:05 PM AEST
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Awww Sweetie, this is fantastic!!!!!
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Re: given up on evermore
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 03:08:27 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa!! I'm speachless! Very deep poem! It has a bitter tone. The wording is breath taking Wow You are a really great poet! I'm stunned! Dark indeed, keep on writing don't give up on love ;)
Anne :D |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 03:28:18 PM AEST
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even sadness is beautiful when you write about it....(( nessa))
Roses
Larry |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by Merry on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 03:32:38 PM AEST
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Nessa my sister in poetry - a beautiful and heartfelt write, your words touch my heart and soul.
merry |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by roisin on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 03:36:22 PM AEST
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I am lost for words Nessa...this is truly beautiful
rosie |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by Shadow on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 03:41:07 PM AEST
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What can be said for word of woe? glistining in the sunsets glow....
The darkness flows in with the sweet bliss of the light. They intwine threw the twilight. So much like life. These are the only word i can say to do justice to such beauty.
Shadow ^_^ |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:48:27 PM AEST
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| Such beauty in these words, such heartache ... my comment can't do justice to the way this poem moved me today ... Jan |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 09:05:56 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa, this is splendid indeed, and eloquently written for all to see!
Please never giving up loving...for when you do...you are giving up on you!
Your words were so beautiful.......I could close my eyes and visually be there with you.
Just when you think you can't live without evermore.......that's when it's the most likely to walk through your hearts door!
Never give up...........forevermore!
love you
consue |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 09:07:02 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa, this is splendid indeed, and eloquently written for all to see!
Please never giving up loving...for when you do...you are giving up on you!
Your words were so beautiful.......I could close my eyes and visually be there with you.
Just when you think you can't live without evermore.......that's when it's the most likely to walk through your hearts door!
Never give up...........forevermore!
love you
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Re: given up on evermore
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 10:58:00 PM AEST
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| Oh weeping heart, please mend for thee, your poets soul has crossed the sea, these words cry tears so loud and true, Oh Lady Nessa, we all love you, ...... take care, hugs, Val |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by venkat on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:23:50 AM AEST
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Great poetry..great imagery..beautiful and heart touching and also soul stirring..simply superb..hats off my dear great poetess..
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Re: given up on evermore
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:10:44 PM AEST
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A stirring rendition of colorful pain we all endure through love, and love lost. Deep, dark, breathtaking, and emotionally right on the mark! Excellently portayed!
{{{{{nessa}}}}}}
~~~angel~~~always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 10:33:30 PM AEST
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Hi ladyfawn.
this is a great write words that touch the heart deep down.it true and sound.
please keep up with this good life changing stuff.
love your friend Richard Campbell. |
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Re: given up on evermore
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:33:29 PM AEST
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| You write really good dark writes Nessa. I loved reading thie one. Keep penning my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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