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Designate This!
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:08:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Fear, fear, fear. You think you own me. You think I'm your personal ***** Who you can spread in the backseat of a car Make me weak and scream and shiver like a newborn child Make me forget everything I stand for Make me forgo the dreams that keep me burning Make me abandon the ones I love Well, think again. I'm tired of being slapped around Sick of conforming to your so-called reign I'm just as strong as you, maybe even stronger I can spin the situation 180 degrees to my liking I don't understand why we're all so afraid of you When all it takes is the courage to soar a little higher You took away some of the best moments of my life But I won't be deterred I'm not a labeled prototype that you can dismantle Nor a gullible damsel-in-distress that you can brainwash with your mind***** Or a defenseless kingdom you can conquer I'm my own fighter with courage as my weapon Thanks for dropping by, but you're not welcome You'll go your merry way, but I know You'll always be plotting your comebacks Well, you can try your best, but you'll never be able to specify me, so Designate this!
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Re: Designate This!
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:27:02 AM AEST (User
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Bravo, bravo, take a bow.
Very strong, moving, positive write...
Great work of art!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Designate This!
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 02:10:27 AM AEST (User
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Wow, immense passion in this poem. I'm sorry I didnt read it sooner. Great job.
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Re: Designate This!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:19:18 AM AEST (User
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And goal for you!
Powerful, I love it.
Keep it up!
Hur |
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