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Mark my word
Contributed by
ZooYork_Chick
on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:27:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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id like to say im fine now
id like to look you in the face
i hate what you have done to me
its what i cant replace
theres nothing left to do now
im left without a choice
i need to cope please tell me how
wheres that help
wheres that voice
the past year ive sat here crying
and ended up asleep
thats how i get to bed at night
thats how i get my peace
i cant get rid of what you did
i remember every last bit
so how do you get to sleep at night
just how do you manage it?
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2004-02-09 03:27:50]
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Re: Mark my word
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:33:32 AM AEST
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| Writing is part of the healing process. Whatever it is that you've gone through, I hope that writting this has made you feel better. Very simplistic wording, but effective nonetheless and straightforward...I enjoyed reading it. Piece of advice though, you might want to check your punctuation next time. |
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Re: Mark my word
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 04:04:17 AM AEST
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I hear every word u say and certainly can relate.
Very good work of art.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Mark my word
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by Kie on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 09:31:25 PM AEST
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| Your poem was filled with emotion. Writing can be a great way to vent and I think you are doing great! Kie |
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