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Resignation
Contributed by
SensitiveSoabused
on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 08:57:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Your voice resonates,
it percolates,
Black Coffee
through my mind...
and how I find --
I've lost my way
the cost to
pay
...inundates...
Now my shirt is stained;
my crimson tears,
my hair is torn,
I've fled...
Running from myself, my head,
I'm always close behind...
Now how I find
I've lost my way
The cost to
pay
...decimates...
So shaking, still,
I laugh at me,
Insanity will bind.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoabused
... [
2004-02-09 20:57:04]
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Re: Resignation
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:25:45 PM AEST
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dude this was awesome. 'Insanity will bind' that is so good and so true. A beautiful, heart felt poem from one of the master's
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Re: Resignation
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 02:02:06 AM AEST
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Hey, this is great stuff. Keep writing, you got real talant.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Resignation
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:45:46 PM AEST
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Whoa, as usual. I'm getting rather tired of saying "whoa" and "wow" on poems here --I find myself saying or thinkiing such on yours kind of a lot-- so someone remind me to get a new one . . . okay, got it. Now I'll start this over:
Heavens to Betsy! *cough* Erm, yeah . . . well, anyway, very nice job on this one (nice is another word I need a better term for . . . ). Ever line is just threaded with emotion and power; definitely a pleasure to read. Glad I found it.
I ever tell you how jealous I am of your writing ability? If not, consider it said.
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Re: Resignation
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 05:01:16 AM AEST
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| O_O That was kick ass cool. Do you put your poetry to music? Because I think it would sound really good. |
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