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Neverending test
Contributed by
kellros
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:08:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Once again i look towards the sky,
to find something that is not there.
Once again i take my final breathe,
but it never seems to last, for there is another coming.
Once again i am being tested,
through pain and suffering.
Once again i suffer,
because i bothered to care.
Once again the world does not care,
and i realise that all these tests...
result to nothing.
Once again i breathe my final breathe,
just to find myself do it again.
Copyright ©
kellros
... [
2004-02-10 10:08:37]
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Re: Neverending test
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:54:45 PM AEST
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Tis the season to be dreary? Well, keep breathing... good writing!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Neverending test
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 03:03:43 PM AEST
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| thanks, i appreciate comments if you are willing to bother, depressesion leads to tension, tension leads to pain... the poem is where the pain lead to |
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Re: Neverending test
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by L-Dee on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 04:00:56 PM AEST
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| Unfortunately not many can be bothered. Very deep poem, x |
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