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Spin
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 05:49:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Love me when I love too much
When I'm drifting out of touch
Every pain and every fear
Please accept my endless tears
What I am is what I'll be
And it was you who chose me
Don't just let it all go now
And we'll find our way somehow
The dreams I dream shine so bright
Reflected in my eyes like starlight
What I feel, I feel so deep
I even feel it in my sleep
Will you come and take my hand
Maybe start to really understand
What it is that drives my soul
That makes me spin out of control
Love me when I lose my mind
When I'm slowly going blind
All the anger, all the hate
Choking till I suffocate
What I know is what I do
I never meant to change you
Tell me what you see within
And give it a chance to win
I believe in Destiny
Who decides if we are meant to be?
I live for love, for you
For everything you always do
I dance beneath the moonlight
And to me, that's when life feels so right
So tell me, can you love me
For who and what I'll always be
If you can, then take me there
I want to walk with you everywhere
Tell you all the things I know
The secrets of the stars aglow
The soft ground under your feet
The sound of your own silent heartbeat
Hold my tears within your hand
I really hope you understand
What is it that drives my soul?
That makes me spin out of control?
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2004-02-10 17:49:41]
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Re: Spin
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 05:52:19 PM AEST
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Living for love, beautiful beautiful thing. I'd say chocolate makes you spin out of control, but I'm probably wrong on that one... hehe
~Remy~ |
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Re: Spin
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:14:47 PM AEST
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| Your poem is incredible. Loved every line. Kie |
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Re: Spin
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:56:11 PM AEST
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This is awesome Moonlit....
Just beautiful |
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Re: Spin
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 07:01:16 PM AEST
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wonderful write
Shari |
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Re: Spin
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:13:07 AM AEST
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a very enjoyable read.. loved it..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Spin
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:48:48 AM AEST
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oh dee! absolutely breathtaking, may you have everything your heart desires, you so deserve it hon, huggies n' love nessa
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Re: Spin
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:33:07 AM AEST
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Love is a truly amazing thing... And you have TONS of it. You have a way of putting it into words... Wow. Whatever you do, keep writing. And loving.
Take care.
David
P. S. And if you haven't, watch "The Passion of the Christ". (Sorry if I seem, like a fanatic, but I just watched it, and it blew me down...) |
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