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Pain
Contributed by
kristin0924
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 07:31:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm drowning in
My misery
The pain inside
Will be no more
My body's aching
But I can't yell for help
It's screaming inside
And I can't bare the sound
Will somebody come
And answer my prayers
A lonely girl
Just wanting out
Noone knows my name
I get lost in the crowd
I'm already forgotten
Who'll know I'm not around
Just one cut
A slit of the wrist
The blood will come
Like endless rain
Poor down my arms
And into the tub
Watch the water
Fill with blood
The pain is exiting
A body full anguish
And just like that
It's over.......
Copyright ©
kristin0924
... [
2004-02-10 19:31:45]
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Re: Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 08:15:10 PM AEST
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| Well you have a great passion for drama.. "Pour down my arms and into the tub watch the water fill with blood" It's script writing very well done. Now you need more story line what is the pain? Depression? Love? Illness? Then script write those thoughts and you have a masterpiece. It's Quentin Tarrantino poetry... Very interesting.. |
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