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In Between
Contributed by
evryrose
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 09:19:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Her blue eyes like the sea are now clouded
Grey with a salty mist like the ocean
And the steady rain outside her window
She lies on the rumpled pillowcase resonating quiet sobs Muffled by her teddy bear, faded and bald staring back at Her
Such a childhood comfort for such grown-up fears
Such a child thrust into the reality of youth
Caught in the middle, not ready to be an adult but not able To be a child
She is merely drifting in between
Caught in the winds of not quite there and almost gone
Copyright ©
evryrose
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2004-02-10 21:19:02]
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Re: In Between
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by intelectualpoet on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 09:23:41 PM AEST
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| I know where this came from, and you do also. But I really like it baby, great one ;-) |
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Re: In Between
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by jeanie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 03:57:32 AM AEST
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Well done and nice one :D
Sounds kinda familiar to me, maybe I've missed something before, but anyways you've made it way gooood (Y) :D
jeanie |
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