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Do you Believe?
Contributed by
Cora-Windover
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 11:34:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The phoenix rising
Up from a pile of ashes
Gracefully reborn
Reaching to the sky
And starting out a new life
Waiting for the sun
The phoenix crying
A silouhetted shadow
Flying towards the dawn
The phoenix burning
Scorched feathers fall to the ground
Flaming fantasy
Reaching to the moon
Dying, bleeding, fade away
Waiting to be free
The phoenix dying
Down to a pile of ashes
Now do you believe?
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Cora-Windover
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2004-02-10 23:34:54]
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Re: Do you Believe?
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:31:04 AM AEST
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Hmmmm...I found this to be rather intriguing. I loved each line, and have always had an affinity for the Phoenix (hell, I live in Phoenix!). Great job, very enjoyable.
Truly,
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