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Torn two ways
Contributed by
Strat
on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 12:18:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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in a city of lovers
i'm a man torn in two
the love of another
or the love for you
cast away your shadows
hidden your face
i know you cant hear me
but listen any way
you......
i thought you loved me
but you.....
never heard me
and you.....
just out of reach
and i
i've always loved you.........
the thought of your memory
replays in my dreams
a lovers tale
a lovers life
broken at the seams
The perfect fantasy
floating away
was it me
was it you
it was never there to say
Summer days and summer nights
lived out in bed
the romance of it all
was it just dead
could i have been there
for you more
is this your way of
settling some score
you......
i thought you loved me
but you.....
never heard me
and you.....
just out of reach
and i
i've always loved you.........
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Strat
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Re: Torn two ways
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 08:27:18 AM AEST
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| well written. venkat |
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Re: Torn two ways
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by Rain on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:33:25 AM AEST
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this poem reminds me of a spiderweb so pretty it draws you in and keeps your mind within its crasp tangled in its words. great write in other words.
~sara~ |
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Re: Torn two ways
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by Rain on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:33:45 AM AEST
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this poem reminds me of a spiderweb so pretty it draws you in and keeps your mind within its crasp tangled in its words. great write in other words.
~sara~ |
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Re: Torn two ways
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by Strat on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:42:58 PM AEST
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| i've written music to it, i wish i could share it with you, if anyone has any ideas, let me know.... |
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