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Keep Going?
Contributed by
facingsin
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Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:41:25 AM in AEST
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How do I keep going?
Do I continue to fight?
My chances I keep blowing!
I create my own plight!
Why is it I can only see
The right thing to do
When its too late for me
And too late for us too?
Isnt it ironic?
The person I want so badly to please
Has a trust problem thats chronic
And for me, is impossible to appease
My mind doesnt seem to work
At least, not as it should
The wrong answer always seems to lurk
Seemingly showing falsehood
Your arguments are strong
And youve every right to believe
Whether right or wrong
That you cant trust in me
Do you not understand?
Why I cant give you a reason?
As I look from where you stand
I too, see only my treason
Theres nothing I can say
And nothing that can be done
For my mind to work right, I pray
But, I fear the ends already begun
It just doesnt matter anymore
For happiness, I dont want to try
My heart is so sore
And hope only leads me to cry
Sleep no longer concerns me
Or keeping my food down
Ill approach life calmly
And in tears, let my heart drown
My children still need me
For about another ten years
So I must remain steady
And somehow, contain my tears
It doesnt sound satisfying
I guess Ill make it through
Probably with much sighing
But bliss, Ill not pursue
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Re: Keep Going?
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:12:25 AM AEST
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| Very good write..well written. venkat |
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Re: Keep Going?
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:00:31 AM AEST
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I've been where you are. At the risk of sounding trite, the good news is that you are growing and that writing about what you're living is helping you to grow. Better days await.
Stitch |
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