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what is your defugilty?
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:53:29 PM in AEST
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a palagorria of miscellaneous promises
from you or only pretend fantasys
ungenuined passions that filled me
within my soul and gave me hope
just unreal to anything but my heart
ignore me, do you feel better in the land of la
i'll just sit all night and write by candlelight
as you postulate and decide for two
your logic lost in the debree of yesterday
words that mean nothing mean everything sometimes
~*~
can you not express yourself any better
than me me me me me me and i?
what you did what you do; you you
so important your goals are met
i love hearing about you but some
times i need to be understood too
much ado about it all and then some
for i do not agree nor care anymore
~*~
then silence
~*~
yes i am guilty here of some verbicide
yet most of them are real and true
my meaning clear as a babbling brook
to anyone or one who cares to listen
and then, so which of us is the zeitgeist?
you make me wamble whilst you xenobobulate
words that mean nothing mean everything sometimes
* oh, do tell me please, what is your defugilty? *
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Re: what is your defugilty?
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:13:07 PM AEST
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absolutely stunning... down to the last letter.. amazing truely :)
Luke x |
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Re: what is your defugilty?
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:20:01 PM AEST
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What a poem! Had to re read it several times, at some point of it I smiled, it's brilliant. Wow you have a very vast vocabulary, the poem is amazing! I loved the style very original write!
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Re: what is your defugilty?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:54:32 PM AEST
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You lay your heart on the line in this one ((nessa)). Beautiful and heartwrenching.
Roses
Larry |
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 06:13:36 PM AEST
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| This is the best wambling I've ever read ... please don't stop writing your clever poetry Nessa ... you put a huge smile on my face this morning with this poem, thank you ... Jan |
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Re: what is your defugilty?
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:07:53 PM AEST
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WOW this was really great! Well done on this!
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 08:27:30 PM AEST
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| I loved the poem, it was awesome. But I honestly do not know what the word defugilty means, i've never heard of it. Great poem though. Kie |
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Re: what is your defugilty?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:36:45 PM AEST
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| Your verbiage is excellent and extremely entertaining. Great work. Rita |
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:44:26 PM AEST
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great, wonderful, loved it
Shari |
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Re: what is your defugilty?
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by Jazz on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 12:04:02 AM AEST
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I'm not sure what to say, since your inttelect has stunned me beyond recognition. You put these tough words, into poetry, and you did an amazing job!
Jazz |
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Re: what is your defugilty?
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by venkat on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:32:14 AM AEST
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| Awww..the best wambling..your meaning is clear as a babbling brook!!! hehe..a wonderful write in stream of consciousness. just inebriating..very cool. venkat |
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:37:12 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this was truly amazing. I thought it was an excellent write. Perfect job my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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