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over you
Contributed by
ChriszBabiie1570
on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:01:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I made a change in my life
i moved on stopped the strife
I decided i couldnt take this any longer
becuz with every hit you made me stronger
i am not laughing at you
im smiling cuz i have control
i dont care what you do
im not your punching bag anymore
i dont have to take your bull
its not my place to
i never did anything wrong
but was punished with a hit from you
its over and done
dont call me anymore
cuz this is the last time
i let you calle me a whore
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Re: over you
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:39:10 PM AEST
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That is the way we gain the strength to move on "with every hit." You've certainly touched something almost every woman can relate to---whether it's physical blows, emotional abuse, or just being involved with a control freak. Nice work.
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