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Argosy of life
Contributed by
Aika
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:50:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am very lonesome
Left in solitude
I used to feel fine
When I thought I had mates,you
Forlorn in the argosy of life
Knife through the ocean waves
Lots of hungry sharks
I do not see anything else
Suddenly like a twister
Storm had come
Argosy has broken
Water swept me down
When I thought it was my end
As a miracle I was saved
From the teeth of sharks
I am building a new argosy
To cruise for expedition
Marauding pirate dont wanna be
I will go straight in future
For silly moments
Which nearly cost me life
Due to it I understood
Who were real friends of mine
Jsem jako kůl v plotě
Samotě ponechn
A bvvalo mi dobře
Kdy myslel jsem, e kmoe mm
Sm na korbu ivota
Vlny ocenů prorm
raloků hladovch spousta
Vc nic u nevidm
Nhle se jako smrť
Bouřka strhla
Korb se roztřtil
A mě voda smetla
Kdy jsem si myslel,
e přiel můj konec
Zzrakem jsem neskončil
ralokům v zubech
Stavm si nov korb
Popluju na vpravu
Nechci bt loupeiv pirt
Zjednm v sobě npravu
Pro pr blznivch chvil
Kter mě mlem stly ivot
Jsem alespoň pochopil
Kdo vdycky stl za mnou
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-02-12 08:50:43]
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Re: Argosy of life
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:07:27 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem, simplistic but hits home. What language is the 2nd version of the poem in? |
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Re: Argosy of life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:48:40 AM AEST
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| Its just a chance to read your poem first time and to put a comment for you. I don't know how much you try to write but guess You have tellents to be creative one.
I remember the day it was 18th of February 2003 when I met first American friend she used to write. In next day she sent me a Poem and I loved it so much. The moment has encouraged me to translate some my old poems from Bengali to English but I didn't find my scripts. But I could write some and i never saved most of them as I got a habit not to record things righway.
Aika - two best things are your key to success and they are Emotion and high thoughts. I am sure someday we together can try to publish a Book with all your best poems when I would be very closer to do it in life.
Don't stop what you are doing, try new things then for your own pleasure... Loves, Nisjat/Bangladesh
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Re: Argosy of life
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:31:01 PM AEST
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Hold onto your true friends with all your heart Aika.
They will always be there for you, somewhere.
steve
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Re: Argosy of life
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 02:30:29 PM AEST
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you ship is with one more passenger, me, beautiful poem aika, hugs n' love nessa
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