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Eaten alivesněden zaživa
Contributed by
Aika
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:30:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Walking through my life
Sunny paradise,
Here and there soft rain
To only refresh the earth
I have love and silver spoon
Angels with halo
Fate endowed me generously
And in real I am the king
Suddenly vultures only
pecking my body
I am their sustenance
Expelled from paradise
I suffer in this desert
My soul is gone
Devils dirty game
Burnt it like paper whole
For a bit of dimness
I did not see the light
Rain which was so needed
I thought was hell that time
I wanted to taste
Wine which was poison
I was too proud king of blindness
Now, I will be eaten alive
Krčm si ivotem,
Rjem prosluněnm
jen tu a tam sprchne
aby dť zavlail zemi
Mm lsku i blahobyt,
Anděly co maj svatozř
tědře mě osud vybavil
J jsem vlastně krl
Kdy jednoho dne
Spatřil jsem přzrak
Zvědavost mě thla
Chtěl jsem ho poznat
R:
Najednou supi jen
Do mho těla klovaj
jejich potravou jsem
a z rje vyhnan
V thle pouti trpm
Due m u nen,
Satanova hřčka lehce
Splila ji jak papr
pro trochu era
neviděl jsem světlo
dť kter byl třeba
tenkrt mi připadal jak peklo
chtělo se mi ochutnat
vna, jen bylo jedem
byl jsem pyn krl slepota
teď budu zaiva sněden
R:
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-02-12 09:30:36]
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Re: Eaten alivesněden zaživa
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:52:28 AM AEST
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Your friend should be pleased. Good stuff.
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Re: Eaten alivesněden zaživa
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:54:11 AM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
That was wonderful Aika......you are always doing such nice things for your friends. I hope he appreciates your effort, I know I certainy do!
Would make a great song. How do you do it!
Just sit down and write? What a wonderful gift!
love you,
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Re: Eaten alivesněden zaživa
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:01:00 PM AEST
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| Some I didnt understand but it was still well done indeed! You have a caring heart! Christina |
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Re: Eaten alivesněden zaživa
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:19:57 AM AEST
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I would love to be a thought inside your mind.Some of the images I would meet there would be truly breathtaking I'm sure
steve
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