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Bottled demon
Contributed by
Crash
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:36:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I open a bottle
then pour it down the drain
this bad habbit
was driving me insane
I drank too often
causing nothing but hurt and pain
to hell with this
this habbit can go
the pain it can cause
only a few know
I made alot of mistakes
screwed up alot
never thoght it was bad
thought it made me hot
why in the hell
would i hurt myself this way
over and over
each and every day?
good bye my demon
for you shall never win!
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Crash
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2004-02-12 11:36:52]
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Re: Bottled demon
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by mercedes on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:49:28 AM AEST
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| Good write and good luck on keeping the demon at bay |
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Re: Bottled demon
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by poet_of_anger on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:57:41 PM AEST
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| great poem, definitely grabs and holds readers attention, and stirs emotions as well. |
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Re: Bottled demon
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:57:48 PM AEST
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| Interesting poem. I like that it ended on a more positive note. All the best to you in controlling your demons. |
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