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White Roses
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PoeticRequiem
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 02:25:51 PM in AEST
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Bitterness eclipses me like purebred insecurties, the presence of you, wanders from my grave
In this cocoon I sleep wonder if I'll find peace? Lying here in casket dreams smile washes over me
White roses in a bloody vase I see that look of pain on your face Why do you look for help within my eyes? Your souls existence is what I despise
Penance seeks no mercy here buried alive with all my fears So please take your pity with you when you go, I don't want you here Covered by forgotten fields under this soil I am sealed Even you can't reach me in this chamber
So now what will you do now that you have no one to put through the ***** you put me through? Save your tears for someone who cares, not me
White roses in a bloody vase you have fallen from my grace Pick yourself up and carry on by my side, no more, be forever gone
White roses in a bloody vase I see that look of pain on your face Why do you look for help within my eyes? Your souls existence is what I despise
As you turn to leave, for the last time you say goodbye to me I hope this is the last of you I will ever see, no more haunting my thoughts and dreams
White roses in a bloody vase stay away from my sacred place The earth is my final home while my body rests my spirit will roam
by; Jeremiah D. Normich ( The Wordsmith )
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Re: White Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by loopylou on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 02:38:43 PM AEST (User
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aw i love this its great. |
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Re: White Roses
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:46:19 PM AEST (User
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that was really good |
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Re: White Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by poet_of_anger on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:54:37 PM AEST (User
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Nice, nice, nice, i know what that feels like. |
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Re: White Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:51:46 PM AEST (User
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Ooooh, quite dark, very enjoyable read. |
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Re: White Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by AsrealTheFallen10 on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:33:07 PM AEST (User
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I like it. |
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Re: White Roses
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:55:50 PM AEST (User
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I love this. I would like to ask you for permission to use the first 3-4 verses in an acoustic song I am writing. PLease contact me at theperfectfuneral@yahoo.com or PerfectFuneral on aim with the answer and i can send you a copy of the song if it is a yes.thanks -Craig |
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