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Sea of Salvation
Contributed by
L-Dee
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:36:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Rejected soul from the day of birth
On this world I live the greatest curse
Seven mirrors broke, stood on each crack
The weight of life, anchored to my young back
Energy levels are running on low,
Where along this winding path did I go
Did I let go of your grasping hand
For this journey of mine, was never planned
Silence, the most comforting sound
Peace atlast, salvation I have found
As I let go, drift further out to sea
The current has caught, all that is me
Further I drift away from you all,
On the next tide I catch the mightly call
Let my mind be free, to tell of this tale
For my next life I will certainly not fail
Copyright ©
L-Dee
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2004-02-12 18:36:35]
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Re: Sea of Salvation
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by arden on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:45:25 PM AEST
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love it love it love it, soo good, great job.
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Re: Sea of Salvation
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:43:47 PM AEST
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this was confusing, but good nonetheless.
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