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Path to Destiny
Contributed by
waynster
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 07:13:59 PM in AEST
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Looking this way, that way and all around, I find myself stumbling through yet another town. My clothes, tattered and torn and shoes all worn out, the people always are looking and have something to shout. It's the words that people say that keeps me on my way. As I look around I think of my past, I see me as a person that's been moving not very fast. The streets are sometimes empty and a lonely place to be, but I have found that this is the world that was chosen for me.
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Re: Path to Destiny
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 07:22:23 PM AEST
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Another lovely post.... The imagery here is good.... I felt myself walking with you....
Welcome, once again...
Jenni |
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Re: Path to Destiny
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by Aika on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 07:23:04 PM AEST
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| Great, Wayne.. keep writing, please.. :-) love, aika:-) |
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Re: Path to Destiny
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by Waynster on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 07:27:53 PM AEST
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| Thank you Jenni! I just found out about this site from a friend. Your lovely comments are very thoughtfull. |
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Re: Path to Destiny
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:15:41 PM AEST
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| I loved this one so much, it's very meaningful and reflects my thoughts perfectly! You get a 5 for this. |
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Re: Path to Destiny
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:19:10 PM AEST
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| Jack Kerouac-esque. Enjoyed this muchly. |
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Re: Path to Destiny
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by desire on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:00:31 PM AEST
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| short sweet and to the point,,,you seem to say a lot with a few words...i like that....alot |
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