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Not wanting
Contributed by
lildrama04
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Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 07:48:20 PM in AEST
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Not wanting to be close to you anymore
Not wanting to hold you in my arms at night.
Not wanting to hear your voice every time the phone rings.
Not wanting to be around you when you
have done nothing but cheat, lie and pretend to love me.
Why did you betray me whenever I told you something private
Not wanting to be close to a lying, back-stabbing cheating jerk.
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lildrama04
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2004-02-12 19:48:20]
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Re: Not wanting
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by Kie on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:03:14 PM AEST
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| The anger and honesty was excellent in this poem. I liked the way you expressed yourself. You tell em! Kie |
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Re: Not wanting
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by Remy on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:04:58 PM AEST
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Ah well, don't let the sun go down on your anger... forget the bastard, move on!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Not wanting
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by norticus on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:11:20 PM AEST
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This one is fun and zesty. I like it. It has flavor and a good venomous pace. I give it a 4.0 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: Not wanting
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by norticus on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:59:26 AM AEST
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This is fun and melodic like a cool breeze over hot sand next to a laughter filled kiddy pool. I like the funny ending. I give this a 3.8 on the Nortiscale.
norticus |
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Re: Not wanting
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by NirvanaLotus on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:50:09 AM AEST
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| *whistles with a smirk* strength to you. men are such dicks sometimes. definetly one of my fave poems |
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