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The first wet love story
Contributed by
loopylou
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:43:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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rain rushing
the first wet love story
feature just you and me
and a drowned deserted beach
waves crashing
ripples fighting to keep a float in the rough sea
both of us wet as you hold me
whispered words hardly heard above the storm
"i love you"
we both know their true
so even love can survive the most cold surroundings
a quote baked up from the heavens showering
so no sun here shines
just the shivering of your teeth and mine
no hot dry sand
just us hand in hand
but sweet heart thats all i need
just you and me
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loopylou
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2004-02-13 12:43:32]
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Re: The first wet love story
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 03:29:03 PM AEST
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So sweet and romantic....
Kie |
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Re: The first wet love story
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:57:22 PM AEST
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Arghh Kie took the words I wanted to say! I loved this poem! It has such a vivid description I could immagine the sound of the storm and sea, very romantic! Great write!
Anne :D |
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