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Tired
Contributed by
fawkingmeower
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:52:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'll stumble, I'll sleep walk through another day with the single thought that it shouldn't be this way.
I had dreams, I had hopes, but they all died with me.
They left me, stranded, and waiting for infinity,
but some how, this pessemistic point of view holds me tight,
and teases me with hope that I will sleep tonight.
Can't sleep through my addictions.
Time goes by, all I can do is watch it pass me.
I'm lost in my restrictions, everyday is just more pain,
it's making me laugh.
You'll watch, you'll take notes,
each time that I ***** up, with a little smile on your face, when I run out of luck.
Had a heart, I once cared,
but I don't anymore. What good is it?
I don't know what's in store, but some how, I fooled myself again,
this is not right, when I know there will be no sleep tonight.
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fawkingmeower
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2004-02-13 12:52:21]
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Re: Tired
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by harmoni on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:24:43 PM AEST
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| WELL WRITTEN |
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Re: Tired
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 02:51:26 PM AEST
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| really good, i can't see one thing that i don't like. keep 'em coming! please... |
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Re: Tired
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 02:51:27 PM AEST
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| really good, i can't see one thing that i don't like. keep 'em coming! please... |
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Re: Tired
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by FawkingMeower on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 02:59:47 PM AEST
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| Thanks you guys. |
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Re: Tired
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:55:26 AM AEST
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wow this is very good I can relate to this a bit, "Can't sleep through my addictions." That line was tight.
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Re: Tired
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by FawkingMeower on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 02:02:07 AM AEST
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| Thanks bobo |
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