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Memories
Contributed by
angelvamp
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 03:15:54 PM in AEST
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Here I stand outside,
Stranded and lonely,
Watching the beautiful and lovely world inside,
Looking in I dont feel so lonely,
The world then closes in around me,
I feel trapped,
Then her face swirls all around me,
Her beauty has me tightly wrapped,
The feeling of helplessness now goes away,
The memories come back to me,
I have something to say,
Cause the memories have come back to me,
The flawless pale skin,
The innocent face,
So without any sin,
Her smile is a wonder,
Brightening the day,
Her scent reminds me of flowers,
So unlike the color gray,
But all these were washed away,
When she left me here alone in the way,
She shattered my world to pieces,
And now as I stand here,
Looking in from the outside,
The years that have passed,
The memories return,
And I catch a glimpse of my scars,
Finding that I still feel the same,
I watch as she passes by,
And I know I will love her forever,
Even if she has said goodbye
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Re: Memories
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by MrWrite on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 03:25:59 PM AEST
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| Well written and filled with emotion. I liked it. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Memories
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:42:13 PM AEST
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Oh *cries* what a bitter/sweet poem! I loved the poem so full of love and sadness, its description is very vivid! Great write! Loved it!
Anne :D |
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