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If only he knew
Contributed by
SAT
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:10:58 PM in AEST
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Betrayed more than once,
Hurt more than twice,
Why can't people,
just try being nice?
Loved by one,
hated by many,
Does he hate me now,
Does he... would he?
Only one looked,
the rest turned away,
I must leave now,
But how i want to stay.
One too many foes,
and not enough friends,
Run, fast, now,
cause you didnt then.
But its too late now,
you all have fallen,
Because of the weapon in my hand,
Their pain i will sorrow in.
I hold it up,
Close to my head,
Better say goodbye now,
cause you won't ever again.
The sorries weren't enough,
Although they could have changed my mind,
But if only they knew,
i need it from him, one more time.
His sorry would have saved you,
I would have put down the gun,
But my fate was decided,
And now my chances are all done.
Copyright ©
SAT
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2004-02-13 16:10:58]
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Re: If only he knew
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by arden on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 04:15:48 PM AEST
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another great write, awesome, i like it alot.
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Re: If only he knew
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:34:50 PM AEST
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I liked the way you wrote this, The poem is very bitter, you've expressed youself very good. Keep it up! Great write!
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