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Tears of Love
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:08:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Tears of Love
Somewhere in heaven
There's an Angel who cries
His love earthly bound
No longer she flies
Gone are her memories
Of their Angelic love
She is placed in a life
With no memory of above
Now it is custom in heaven
No Angel should cry
For eternals the view
To know the reasons why
But ever so often
A love is so strong
The separation of lovers
Can be nothing but wrong
Such was the love
Of two Angels of light
A love so beautiful
So perfect, so right
From the beginning of time
Until she went away
These Two Angels in heaven
Loved every day
Until it was time
For her duty in life
To help a wayward soul
As a kind and loving wife
Now the angel sits alone
Heart broken in two
Without her love
He knows not what to do
Then one day he thought
"My hope's growing weak"
"Into the world I will go"
"My true love to seek"
So taking the form of a dove
To the earth he did fly
No one should notice
A dove with a tear in its eye
There he saw his Angel
In love with another
Heart breaking in two
His pain he tried to smother
He could not help but cry
The pain was so strong
And as the tears fell
He sang a mournful song
" How can you not remember"
" The way we use to be"
"You swore you'd never forget"
" Always my heart you would see"
Hearing something familiar
In the heart of the dove
And the sound of his voice
Reminding her of love
She turned to look closer
He mounted to the sky
As she watched him fade away
There fell a tear from her eye
Russ
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Re: Tears of Love
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by arden on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:13:58 PM AEST
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oh my god! wow! just wow. i loved that. so freakin sad but you wrote it so perfectly!
impressive talent.
Arden |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:23:14 PM AEST
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| I loved this one! Kie |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:26:42 PM AEST
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Magnificent write, Russ....
Jenni |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:10:50 AM AEST
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| ohhh russ, what a beautifully written story of love astray, *sniff* hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:24:21 AM AEST
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| Ok I need the tissues! How sweet & sad but oh so beautifully done! I loved this write by far! Christina |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:16:28 AM AEST
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| Wow what an incredible poem <br />
Such imagination <br />
A supreme poem tops<br />
<br />
Exeptional one of the best<br />
<br />
Love angelxxx |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:17:56 AM AEST
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| So sad but beautifull!<br />
Thanks for your sweet comment on my poem.<br />
Great job here. Keep up the good work.<br />
luv, huggs,<br />
emy |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 07:03:12 AM AEST
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| WOW!! The poems you left for me when you commented on my poems were so moving and inspirational that I just had to read more of your work. This sent chills all over me. Such a gift you have, such wonderful talent. Thank you for sharing your words with us. They are so very beautiful. Such talent simply amazes me!!! |
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