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Friends make a difference
Contributed by
Waynster
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Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:12:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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A moment stirred
An echo heard
I await the ending of my pain
A silent cry
Another day goes by
And nothing to have gain
A moments notice
A knock on the door
My head tilts toward the floor
Its the final hour
And a friend walks in
Keeping me from acting a unforgiving sin
On my face
No room for a smile
I only see another day
And walk another mile
This road I walk
Unfriendly and sad
Is of experiences that were bad
Now a friend is here
And my heart sees light
Thankful to him
I will sleep another night
The sun again rises
Another day is here
And there are no echos in my ear
I seem to have a feeling
Coming from deep inside
A feeling that says
I must no-longer hide
I cry no more
Neither will I have thoughts in vain
I believe an end has come to my pain
So thank you friend
For your knock on my door
You have given me hope
And hunger for so much more
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Waynster
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2004-02-13 23:12:06]
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Re: Friends make a difference
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:22:58 PM AEST
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This is really very good. I like the style. I'm glad your friend was there for you.
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Re: Friends make a difference
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by Waynster on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:48:38 AM AEST
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| It almost sounds as if I was suicidal, but I am and was not. What was being talked about in this poem was my inner feelings and How I was lost and had no idea if i would do something stupid. I was cold and lonely. At one of the lowest times in my life, a friend just happened to step in when I was at my lowest moment. Not sure what I would have done, but I know that at that point, he gave me some good advice and it changed my world. |
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