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The Snake
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She is the evil that haunts your dreams
breaks up families and tears up the mind
She lurks in the corner, watching, waiting to strike, like the viper spitting at its prey, only to poision its mind, to suck out all it once was to make it become a foul beast like itself
the dark hates the light, therefore it shall try as hard as it might to convert the light to the dark side to test its faith to see its weakness and its strengths, only to use its weakness against them sucking out all that they are !
Devouring their beauty and staling their spirit of happiness because they aren't happy themselves
JENNA
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Re: The Snake
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:32:00 AM AEST
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Aaah!..my God I am afraid of that serpent...it is very nicely written..thank you.. venkat
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Re: The Snake
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:45:36 AM AEST
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WOW!!! That women must have been awful.
Thank God he is your ex. I can't imagine being in a family like that.
Good luck to you in finding someone so much better . Was he that way too?
this poem was excellent
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Re: The Snake
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:28:56 PM AEST
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| I hate snakes. Great write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: The Snake
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:10:20 PM AEST
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creepy. nicely written though. good job i liked it
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Re: The Snake
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:22:16 AM AEST
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Wow, thanks 4 the warning!
Very wel written.
luv, huggs,
emy
thanks for all your awesome comments on my work. |
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Re: The Snake
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:20:17 AM AEST
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| Hey I know that snake! I wish I could get away but I'm trapped. Good write |
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