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My Turmoil
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:47:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My heart is in turmoil
I dont know what to do
I want you to be happy
But I want to be happy too
I dont want to let you go
And I hope youll choose to stay
But separate, you may need to grow
Yet, for growing with me I pray
Its complete contradiction
And I cant change my heart
My tears will fill the ocean
Should ever we break apart
My heart lightens with your every smile
With it you brighten my day
But when I witness the pain of your trial
The day turns cloudy and gray
Am I making any sense?
Do you understand my cry?
Though it may be at my expense
For your joy, I would comply
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2004-02-14 15:47:22]
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Re: My Turmoil
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by Kie on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 03:57:10 PM AEST
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| An excellent poem! Kie |
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Re: My Turmoil
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:12:30 PM AEST
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Good stuff. Very appropriate today. To unselfishly sacrifice yourself for another's happiness is a noble, but very difficult thing. I hope it works out.
Stitch |
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Re: My Turmoil
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:25:05 PM AEST
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Don't give up on him yet sweety, If you really show you love him - I believe, He'll get better.
I did. Read " Sherry, My Love." |
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Re: My Turmoil
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by Jazz on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:58:43 PM AEST
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Sometimes the best way to love someone is to let them go. Everyone needs a chance to spread their wings, and fly. A heartfelt poem...
Jazz |
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Re: My Turmoil
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 07:14:33 PM AEST
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I have to agree with Stitch and Jazz... Good write...
Jenni |
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Re: My Turmoil
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 08:05:06 AM AEST
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| Sometimes when you leave the gate open, it will keep the dog from jumping over it and getting out of the yard. Give him the room to come home. |
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