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No More
Contributed by
night_child
on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 05:11:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Her test of time
Dangling her fate by an unseen string
Her pain hidden
But always there
Those nights of lust
Cause a life long mistake
A never ending pain
Her troubled mind can see no light
Standing on the edge
She thinks
Has the day finally come?
The day when everything will stop?
Her body sprawled upon the floor
Slowly her life fades
They try to save her
Save this fragile being
But she is gone forevermore
Some will come
And some will cry
Others stay behind
They look upon the body
And don't know what to say
They look upon her face
And gaze into the lifeless eyes
Looking finally at peace
The agony
The tears
No more
Copyright ©
night_child
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2004-02-14 17:11:40]
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Re: No More
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:45:05 PM AEST
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This is a really good written poem. Keep it up.
Take care.
David |
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Re: No More
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:41:11 PM AEST
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| Oh dear! Are you serious about this?! So she is gone for true?! Poor girl.......v_v |
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