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crowd
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 07:14:39 PM in AEST
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I'm there
In the moment
Drifting through a current of people
Electrified
Packed together
Vibing off each other
The sun sets
The moon rises
And falls
We mimic
Now i'm riding keys
Black and white
And feeling every blow to every metal string
With an appreciation I've never felt before
The gods are up there
And we worship
Every movement
Every gesture
Rise
Fall
Listen
Love
Praying it will never end
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-02-14 19:14:39]
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Re: crowd
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by Broken-glass on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:38:18 AM AEST
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'Now I'm riding keys'..... I love that! Really original, good write. I love that feeling!!
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Re: crowd
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by dolly_dagger on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 07:46:29 AM AEST
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| yeah i like it too. the riding the keys line first got put in this poem coz of a projection on the stage of a bit of film of a close up of matt belamy's hands on the piano. and then i realised all the other meanings it cld have. yay 4 words! |
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Re: crowd
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 09:25:13 AM AEST
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The originality and creativity here are exceptional.
Stitch |
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Re: crowd
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:32:19 PM AEST
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| hehey, this is (for any1 else) a damn good represntation of a muse croud. like 1 huge blob of admiration. (cept personally, at the M.E.N arena in novermber, i just felt squashed, and like the sound was really bad, but a smaller gig was like this) |
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