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Are We Dead Yet?
Contributed by
poetic_oddity
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Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 01:36:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Ive got a question, answer please. It just might put my mind at ease. With all the chaos buzzing round. Since tranquility cant be found. Since this is the last chance Ill get? Answer me, Are we dead yet? You look around, theres so much pain. Just what is it we have to gain? Youve derailed the thought train. And now that youre going insane. Since this is the last chance Ill get? Tell me please, Are we dead yet? What is it with this crazy world? Why is it that we are hurled? Into this international asylum. Where its Kill em all and let god sort em. Since this is the last chance Ill get, I entreat, Are we dead yet? Although solitude does comfort. Why is that we contort? Why do we try to fit the mold? Why do we do what we are told? Since this is the last chance Ill get, I ask of you, Are we dead yet? Trying to win a loosing fight. Trying to beat the next third Reich. Trying to get what I adore. Theres one last thing I must implore. Since this is the last chance Ill get, I want to know, Are we dead yet?
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Re: Are We Dead Yet?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 02:14:09 PM AEST (User
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A good poem, but try to be a little bit positive in the authors note. Maybe you'll have more responses. |
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