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My Words
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
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Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 11:21:04 AM in AEST
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My words,
Without your eyes,
Lay a closed dormer,
Facing heaven,
With thoughts,
Chained from knowledge,
Subdued from imagination,
My words,
Like a small machine,
Intricately working together,
A different perception,
To some, blinded perception,
Perceived not,
My words,
Exist not,
With no readers,
My words,
Are not conceived,
Without your eyes, or ears,
My words, in miscarriage.
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Re: My Words
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by antares on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 12:12:27 PM AEST
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| wow i enjoyed that poem a lot. i have just started getting into poetry and so far have enjoyed everything u write. hope u can help me and give me some criticism in the future.. |
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Re: My Words
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 03:45:37 PM AEST
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| A NICE & MEANINGFUL WAY IN WHICH YOU<br />
CONSTRUCTED IT! I LIKED THE MEANING YOU POINT OUTIN IT,TOO!! GREAT WRITE!!!<br />
DAN!!!! |
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Re: My Words
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by Kie on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:08:52 PM AEST
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| Excellent write....Kie |
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Re: My Words
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 06:20:18 PM AEST
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| Hi wesley dale willis,<br />
just simply excellent,your words do have power and says alot about who you are.<br />
i like this write,keep up the good write. |
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Re: My Words
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:08:50 AM AEST
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I can relate...these are correct words my friend:
"My words, Exist not, With no readers,
My words, Are not conceived, Without your eyes, or ears, My words, in miscarriage".
thanks for sharing this..
venkat
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Re: My Words
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:28:05 AM AEST
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| what a nice way of saying what I have to rant and rave over...wonderful. You really are a poet.... |
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Re: My Words
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:05:31 AM AEST
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P.S. to my previous comment...I realize this isn't really a haiku...because of content...but anyway:
words of praises go
up-lifting the spirit
let the comments flow
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Re: My Words
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:32:04 AM AEST
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Oh, I really like this, too. I can definitely relate. I'm so glad I found this site. This is very good stuff!
Stitch |
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Re: My Words
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by norm on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 03:59:28 PM AEST
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Your poem is well constructed and mature
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Musicians who are deaf compose,
They write their music..do you suppose
They give a fig if people hear
They cannot write...there only fear
Your words don't die if no one reads
they miss from life..your magic seeds,
Too bad the fools intakes were low
and TV was their fare to go..
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Re: My Words
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 06:26:24 PM AEST
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Very well written, Wes. Without a reader our work is useless. As writers we all depend on the probing minds and their willingness to explore their world through words. Great write.
Rita |
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Re: My Words
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 06:27:23 PM AEST
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Very well written, Wes. Without a reader our work is useless. As writers we all depend on the probing minds and their willingness to explore their world through the written word. Great write.
Rita |
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Re: My Words
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:45:21 PM AEST
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| This is excellent work and I think how most of us feel about what we try to share. Enjoyed it very much...Russ |
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Re: My Words
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by gery_giggles on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 09:22:05 AM AEST
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i liked^_^..its different.....
luv always |
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Re: My Words
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:08:15 PM AEST
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| I liked this alot. It had a very nice flow to it. First time I read yours and I will read more. |
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Re: My Words
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by arden on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 07:06:31 PM AEST
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nice write. i very much enjoyed it. keep it up i look forward to more.
Arden |
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Re: My Words
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:16:02 PM AEST
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| Excellent and thought provoking. A class poem, Wesley. |
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Re: My Words
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by forever_lonely on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:26:07 PM AEST
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Great poem wes really thought provoking an excellent piece
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Re: My Words
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:26:32 PM AEST
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bravo - very eloquently stated. Words without readers - dormant and unapprecaited - perhaps you will submit some of your work to my ezine -
keep up the good work - I promise I'll be
back to read more
merry |
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Re: My Words
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:40:01 PM AEST
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This should be the poets theme song.....perfect!!
Very well done
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Re: My Words
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by doug on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:49:14 PM AEST
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i must write a response to this amazing poem and though it seems word of mouth has already gotten out about it i will take it and let my friend partake of its beauty. i applaud your talent with vigor for words are not enough. i hope you dont mind if i print it out and keep a copy for myself. you are truly
talented please write more your friend doug |
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Re: My Words
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:56:29 PM AEST
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder as the old saying goes. .................
A clever artfull presentation well written .
I add my congratulatons to the others.
Beauty not beholden
cannot shine golden
though fine an inception
lacking reception
is not conceived
until received.
or have I completely missed the point. I'm going to enjoy working my way down your list. Thanks for inviting me.
bob
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Re: My Words
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:29:25 AM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO!
Wes, my poet friend.
This poem has no end
For words are passed along
Like a tune in a song.......
But if they are not read........
the poet need not think he's default
for they are extensions of his heart
and read or not....of him a part!
Splendid in deed!
Thanking you so much for coming to read
mine.......
Keep up the good word
lovingcritters
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Re: My Words
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:57:58 AM AEST
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Now - Thats intelligent poetry. You should submit this to P.com contest. And it should win.
Lionel |
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Re: My Words
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:27:43 PM AEST
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Oh so true!
very good
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Re: My Words
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by srugglingyoungster on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 07:03:01 PM AEST
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| Amazing, once agian, youve wrote another exellent poem. Dont quit. And its very true. |
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Re: My Words
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:23:19 AM AEST
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| wow, i really like this, and im glad you shared it with us. its a pleasure to read. keep it up. amazing work. *hugs* phil xxx |
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