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If Red Can Be Brown
Contributed by
fldadn1
on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 01:08:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If red can be brown
and a verb can be a noun
then why can't you come around
if a vibe is a sound
and lightning comes from the ground
then why are you nowhere to be found
if a village can be a town
and if the sad man is the clown
then why the hell am I down
if maroon is a color
and your dad can be your mother
then why can't I find another
If cars can hover
or if you have a twin brother
then how could you be undercover
how could the one that hides the most
be my lover
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2004-02-15 13:08:10]
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Re: If Red Can Be Brown
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:17:53 PM AEST
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| Wow this one was a really unique write. I loved the rhyme scheme and the overall feel of the poem. Excellent! Kie |
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Re: If Red Can Be Brown
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 06:36:06 AM AEST
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| with Kie on this - delightful write - although the only gripe (and again, my pedantry shines through, luminously) - can your dad really be your mother?? lol. I'm perplexed . . . |
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