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The sea
Contributed by
Intostella
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Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:47:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you view the sea
It is one enormous whole
You only see the surface
But there is so much more below
When I look at you
I see your face, your hair, your body
Please let me into your depths
Do you think I am that shallow?
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Intostella
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2004-02-15 17:47:58]
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Re: The sea
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 06:00:26 PM AEST
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| short but sweet, I like the ending, and the whole analogy you convey in this poem |
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Re: The sea
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 07:43:17 PM AEST
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| Succint point made. I like it. |
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