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one heart to sea
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 03:25:19 AM in AEST
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
oh, turn it loose and set it free
one heart with no wishes nor plea,
let this poor heart go out to sea
no love for it, no cup of tea,
it loved before and may again
who knows how, or why, or when,
causing only misery and pain
as love for it seems all in vain,
it gave its all, this heart right here
said i love you, called him dear,
now it's cut in little ribbon slices
left alone to its own devices,
shattered heart once loved most
found by love; now loves no host,
he did not care, it thought he did
alas, it was only meant to be led,
why love for this heart's no fairytale
it foolishly thought love true and real,
yet was passed by; one lonely heart
its love that's torn its owner apart,
heart was lost, thrown out was the key
love apple rotted, the dove flew away,
one castaway heart on a loveless sea
died in memory of what love might be,
* oh, let this heart go out to sea. *
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Re: one heart to sea
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 04:01:49 AM AEST
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Wow, sad but you can certainly write a great poem.......Hey the loose is his. some jus can't deal with real luv. They'll go to the ends of the Earth for what they want but when it gets down to the nitty gritty, well friend, don't get me started as most of my friends are male or teenagers and the younger generation. Not all men are a like jus as all women aren't the same so I'm not knocking men in gerneral.
Anyway, hang tuff, my friend.
Very good writing!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 05:06:23 AM AEST
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Yea..this is a great poem filled with sadness of the heart that wants to go out to sea..
Nessa your emotions are heaving like the waves of sea..so sad my friend..sincerely your..
venkat |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 05:11:40 AM AEST
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| My heart bleeds for you ... and there's nothing I can say that will ease your pain, but this write touched my heart tonight ... as I know the pain too well ... hugs Jan |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:07:32 AM AEST
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Awww Ness..this is too touching.... Loved it tho... Hope all is well...will chat soon.
Love and hugs
Jenni |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 10:04:29 AM AEST
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Very touching lost love! It never is easy!
Take care.Christina |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:53:00 PM AEST
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Love is not all it is cracked up to be...when the "honeymoon" phase is over...so seems true love! I can relate to this as I am sure many can!
Hang tough!
{{{{{{{Nessa}}}}}}}}
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:20:23 PM AEST
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this is very sad...and a place I've found myself in before...a place I find myself in now, heh...hope things get better for you, hope to talk to you soon
-your buddy |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Kie on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:40:30 PM AEST
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| This one hit me at my core. Powerful....Kie |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 02:27:07 PM AEST
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touched my heart deeply...you know how to reach me if you need to talk
((((Nessa)))))))))
Shari
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 06:39:05 PM AEST
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This is a BEAUTIFUL poem. I really enjoyed it. :)
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Re: one heart to sea
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by arden on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:21:49 PM AEST
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whoa, that was sooo good. lovely flow nice wording. loved it.
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Re: one heart to sea
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:31:07 PM AEST
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Sad and truely touching
Luke xx |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:58:31 AM AEST
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(((((nessa))))).....heartbreaking yet oh so beautiful. I'm here if ya need me
Roses
Larry |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Merry on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:12:01 PM AEST
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{{{nessa}}}} a broken heart is a terrible thing - yet I feel your star has not yet come to shine, so don't lose hope and give up on something as sweet as love. Hope burns eternal where the heart is concerned.
A very sad write my dear friend, you have such a beautiful command of words, even the saddest ones.
hugs
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:45:22 PM AEST
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| Oh Nessa, this is such a sad write. I loved it though. It's a beautiful write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 08:05:11 PM AEST
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Wow wonderful write. I loved the great stanzas, they flowed together nicely. I liked the rhyming as well.
~Soulless~ |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:12:22 AM AEST
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| Nessa, this was such a beautiful write. I love the pic, it makes the poem. Beautiful, just beautiful. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: one heart to sea
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 10:12:45 AM AEST
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Wow! I was swept up in that ending. One of your masterpieces for sure. The picture, the flow, and your word choice all had me feeling like I was being thrashed around in the ocean.
Well done!
~Scorp |
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