|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Fate
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 11:45:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
|
Hidden paths reveal my doom.
Death is thine eternal gift.
I rush towards defeat.
Forsaking shadows of hidden desire.
Parting is not such a sweet sorrow.
For within this defeat is victory.
In this vast life, of no worth our purpose be.
Only memories are left to linger here.
Destroying destiny.
Fate is but a breath away.
Dauntless I stand before my fate.
The cruel earth manifests within me.
Thy sweet voice ringeth within silence.
Mingling with destiny.
Hope fades into illusion.
The moon wanes into darkness.
The eyes of truth have become blind.
What lies ahead is but a dream.
My soul hath bid me leave.
Copyright ©
SkYYBLu
... [
2004-02-16 11:45:09]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Fate
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shadow on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:50:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| The word flow is very good. Fate was even a good topic. True to its self yet adding a face to it. Food for thought. What would happen if you didn't add a face and just went into fate from fates point of view. Just an idea |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
