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The beautiful you
Contributed by
AmaNdAsHepArD
on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 04:29:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Shes beautiful cant you see
your misery is taming me
to be of what I cannot see
but to see what is not there
is blind to me I try to hear
the sounds that will save me
but its too late take me away
for my body is
Cold, blue, and numb
to your cries and thoughts of pain
deaf to the sounds of you weary screams
and blind to the sight of your pain
that Ive caused by taking
that blade
to hell with me
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2004-02-16 16:29:27]
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Re: The beautiful you
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by wolfmaniii on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 04:50:42 PM AEST
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| dasmn tht was good it made me really emotional very well worded |
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Re: The beautiful you
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by Kie on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:06:56 PM AEST
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| Very emotional it just cries out to me. Well done. Kie |
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Re: The beautiful you
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by Crash on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 01:19:48 AM AEST
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| Awesome write, reminds me of the old days. after i read this the first time, i decided to start posting my suicidal stuff. Dark, and well worded, bravo |
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